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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 28 It’s fitting that this last commentary falls on Bastille Day, and it has everything to do with the story Jon tells Furball. That’s a true story, by the way, of the guitar player who sat down to keep Jon company, except substitute me with Jon. This [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 27 At this point, we’re just cleaning up loose ends. Jon got to come home (Bet you didn’t see that coming! Or, you know, you did… cause it was obvious), got to say his peace about being a teenager that messes up, and how his authority figures [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 26 – Forward to Part 28 …In which Bryan preaches your face off. I almost feel compelled to apologize for how preachy this chapter is. However, it fits with Bryan’s struggle with his parents’ money: it’s not something he’s comfortable about, nor is it something he’s proud [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 25 – Forward to Part 27 If I had been thinking last week, I would have probably noticed that last week’s post was the end of Bourbon and Farly’s story. There used to be a little bit about Farly worrying about Jon, but it was too conveniently [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 24 – Forward to Part 26 So we’ve hit the home stretch. It’s weird knowing this serial has been running for over six months now, and now it’s on its last few chapters. What do I do with myself afterwards? Oh, right, make more stories. This commentary [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 23 – Forward to Part 25 Bryan’s eyes bring up a topic a lot of authors working with anthro fiction have to deal with: What is furry? That is to say, what makes a character furry? Is it enough to have people that resemble animals in appearance [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 21 – Forward to Part 23 I mentioned earlier, and it still holds true, but from here on out, the chapters are fixed at their specific length. I’m now on a schedule, which ends either late June or early July, and with the writing and revising of [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 20 – Forward to Part 22 When I started posting this story in December, this chapter was not a part of it. At least, it wasn’t a part of this specific story. It has always been a part of the Group’s story. I wrote this section out [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 19 – Forward to Part 21 Nowhere is about having a place. I wanted that so badly when I was a teenager, a place to escape to, a place that no one else knew about. A safe place, basically. I didn’t think school, or even home was [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 18 – Forward to Part 20 One of my favorite things about Bourbon gets revealed in this chapter. It’s a secret he’s been carrying with him for a long time, and one he hasn’t really told his friends. His sexuality is out for all his friends to [...]

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