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I’ve been putting off the notes for this section because this is a case of the section really standing on its own. I don’t think I can type 200 words about what’s going on here, though I may try. I could call an “open thread,” have you guys ask me anything you want about the series, but I have always done so, and you never do, save one or two of you. Still, the invitation is open.

When I was writing this section, I thought it was funny the way Galle kind of sulked off the Rose. There’s a lot of emotion being held back or thrown out in this section; Cait holding back, as usual, Xiphos wearing hers on her sleeve, and Galle fluctuating back and forth between composed and angry. But then, when Cait delivers the news that she won’t be coming along, he just kind of leaves, head down, Charlie Brown style. If you like, you can imagine the music that goes along with that.

But I was mindful of that the whole time, Galle sulking away. I think he feels like he lost an ally when his allies are already slim. He does not believe Cait that this is a temporary set back.

Well, hey, that’s pretty close to 200 words. I’m going to call it a day for the notes here. As always, any questions or comments you have are totally welcome.

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