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For those of you keeping track at home, we just got to the end of day six. Toby has tried to escape once, been in handcuffs twice, and has been in two different countries, neither of which were his own. Nina and Xiphos are most likely fighting over the boy, but only because Nina thinks Xiphos is being mean. Tre has not spoken a single word. Cait may have broken the law in Lat waters, but not so much with the COS. And if she hadn’t punched Logan in the face, Billy would have.

We have met five Molyneux, if we exclude Nina and Cait (Galle, Shanda, Chou, Morgan, and Ilonanda). The range of age from the oldest 23rd generation Molyneux is 18 years, from Chou at 46, to Ilonanda at 28. Ilonanda is named after an honorary Molyneux, Gimble’s best friend Ilo Nanda.

This section is by far the longest of the 13, at over 3100 words. This is the leader for sections in the near future. I have not done the math, but I imagine the average section length is closer to 1500 words.

I’m rattling off these stats because I’m at a loss to say about what’s going on in this section, if only because I feel like it’s pretty obvious what’s going on, with the exception of Cait sucker punching Logan, but we’ll talk about that soon enough anyways.

So, I’ll bow out now. Thanks for reading. I just switched over from WordPress.com to a self-hosted account, which means I can get a better feel for how many people actually read theses sections. But until midnight rolls around, I’ll thank all eight of you that are reading. I really do appreciate it.

As always, I’d love to hear any questions or comments you have.

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