Posted in Uncategorized on Oct 27th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 014 Notes – Forward to Part 016 Notes Most of this section is another example of “what I wanted to say has pretty much been said on this section.” Recap: We follow Tre around, Billy can’t cook, Travelers fight, and Cait is excited. Just as she said, in [...]
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Posted in Boat Story, fiction, writing on Oct 26th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 014 – Forward to Part 016 Tre did a quick sweep of the guest quarters to find the sound — and the smell — that was bounding its way through the Rose was Billy. The human leaned over the stove, holding a frying pan. All around him was [...]
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Posted in Boat Story, fiction, writing on Oct 20th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 013 Notes Before I go on about how the Rose is a poorly designed sub, let’s talk about Logan and Cait. We got a brief peek into what Cait and Logan used to be, and I promise we’ll get more of them on the Rose, but right now [...]
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Posted in Boat Story, fiction, writing on Oct 19th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 013 – Forward to Part 015 Five years earlier “You know,” Logan said, wiping the sweat from her brow, “this would make an excellent Relay program.” “How’s that?” Cait rubbed grease off her hands with a towel. She stood, and joined Logan in the middle of the cargo [...]
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Posted in Boat Story, fiction, writing on Oct 13th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 12 – Forward to Part 14 Notes For those of you keeping track at home, we just got to the end of day six. Toby has tried to escape once, been in handcuffs twice, and has been in two different countries, neither of which were his own. Nina [...]
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Posted in Boat Story, fiction, writing on Oct 12th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 012 – Forward to Part 014 Cait sent for Toby to be awakened just after the sunrise. After he had tried to run, Cait thought it best to keep him with her. Toby was delivered to Cait at breakfast in the manor’s dinning hall. She was in the [...]
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Posted in Uncategorized on Oct 10th, 2009
Hey guyths. The blag is going to be having a few problems. I’m on them right now, so sorry if you run in to any. Thanks for bearing with me. UPDATE 10 Oct 2009 19:30 PST: I think I fixed the problem. Let me know in the comments here if anything is still wonky, and [...]
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Posted in Boat Story, fiction, writing on Oct 6th, 2009
New reader? Start here. Back to Part 011 Notes – Forward to Part 013 Notes This week is more Exposition Island. We meet a few more Molyneux, Toby tries to escape, we get to see Cait’s life about 13 years or so before the present. But what I’m interested in talking about today is the [...]
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New reader? Start here. Back to Part 11 – Forward to Part 013 When Toby was sure no one was looking, he ran. It was the money’s fault. That morning, Cait gave him an envelope full of crisp COS Leagues, six hundred, she informed him, his payment for three days of work. Toby did the [...]
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