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Monthly Archive for June, 2009

First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 26 – Forward to Part 28 …In which Bryan preaches your face off. I almost feel compelled to apologize for how preachy this chapter is. However, it fits with Bryan’s struggle with his parents’ money: it’s not something he’s comfortable about, nor is it something he’s proud [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 26 – Forward to Part 28 The Checker was quiet, the hum of the engine making up most of the conversation in the car. Ty pulled off the highway at the Java exit. Bryan leaned against the window, watching the dark suburbs slide past them, pools of [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 25 – Forward to Part 27 If I had been thinking last week, I would have probably noticed that last week’s post was the end of Bourbon and Farly’s story. There used to be a little bit about Farly worrying about Jon, but it was too conveniently [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 25 – Forward to Part 27 For a long time, Bryan stared at the ceiling. It had to have been close to noon, and that was OK. He still lay in Ty’s bed, Ty still huddled close to him, the blankets pulled tight around her. He couldn’t [...]

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Creation Myth [Boat Story]

The Gods found Ta Ante fragile and alone, and they saw fit to give life unto her. The seven gods descended on to the planet and pounded out the great oceans. They shaped the continents, throwing great handfuls of rock into the oceans until they became the islands and the mountains. They planted the mighty [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 24 – Forward to Part 26 So we’ve hit the home stretch. It’s weird knowing this serial has been running for over six months now, and now it’s on its last few chapters. What do I do with myself afterwards? Oh, right, make more stories. This commentary [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 24 – Forward to Part 26 Bourbon snapped out of sleep, sitting up fast, and his mind exploded in eight directions at once. Things weren’t right. The walls weren’t right, they were too close together, and the bed was all wrong, and the space around him felt [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 23 – Forward to Part 25 Bryan’s eyes bring up a topic a lot of authors working with anthro fiction have to deal with: What is furry? That is to say, what makes a character furry? Is it enough to have people that resemble animals in appearance [...]

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First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 23 – Forward to Part 25 Ty materialized out of the dark as Bryan close the basement door. “What happened?” She asked. She had changed into her sleeping clothes, a well-worn T-shirt and a pair of loose pajama pants. She looked comfortable and warm. Bryan took her [...]

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7 Days Commentary, Part 23

First time reader? Start here. Back to Part 22 – Forward to Part 24 I totally fucked up the last two posts. The first part of this post, Furball and Bourbon eating breakfast together, should have been part of the last post. It works, I think, how it ended up, but the breakfast scene should [...]

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