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Cait sounded the departure bell at the tail-end of early morning. She walked through the still Rose — its crew either off on the Prime Meridian or asleep — and stood at the top of the gangplank down to the docks. The sun had risen behind the Prime Meridian, blocked by the ship’s towers of containers, save a few threads that managed to poke out through the haze and smoke of morning on to boats at the docks. Cait stood with her hands on her hips and took in all of this.
Jace walked down the dock, a bag slung over her shoulder, not looking at anything in particular. She started up the gangplank, but froze when she saw Cait waiting. She hesitated, and then proceeded with caution.
“Is everything okay, Captain?” She asked.
“Everything is fine,” Cait said. “I plan to never see this sight again, but that does not mean I do not want to remember it.”
Jace nodded, and Cait turned to let her pass, and then followed her into the Rose.
“It’s an interesting place, sir,” Jace said.
Cait nodded, still following Jace into the guest quarters. “I do not know what to call you,” she said after a moment of careful thought.
“Sir?”
“I do not know by which title to address you. Your position on the Decline is not clear.”
“I don’t like titles,” Jace said. “Call that years of working and living with the people I do, but… If you’re asking my position on the boat, ‘partner’ works best.”
“Partner…” Cait said absently, the working the shock into her spine.
“I own half the boat. I just prefer not to play captain. Though I do prefer to keep an eye on Burian. He gets… ideas.” Jace trailed off, the word ‘ideas’ carrying the weight of experience. “Anyway, ‘Jace’ works fine.”
Cait gave Jace another nod, and left for the bridge. She began to power on the Rose, checking the screens around the helm as she went.
“Captain?”
Jace stood behind her in the hatch of the bridge, watching Cait.
“Yes, Jace?”
“Everything isn’t alright.”
Cait turned back to Jace. “What is wrong?”
“That’s what I’m asking you, sir. It may not be my place, and we’ve only known each other for, well, less than a month, but you’ve treated myself and the people I care about with dignity and grace when you could have dumped us back in the ocean. I feel obliged.”
Cait turned back to the controls. “I am trying to rearrange my crew based on the departure of Helmsman Haari, a man who disappeared from my life thirteen years ago has suddenly reappeared, and the namesake of my boat has appeared in statue form on what could be the biggest pirate stronghold in the world, and oh yes, she is known as ‘the Queen’. I have had a lot to think about in the past few days.” She stopped, staring at the screens as the Rose came to life. “That was uncouth. I apologize.”
Jace took a moment to process all of this. “I may be in over my head.”
“I found the trick is to never let on to that,” Cait said.
“I guess the Rose thing would be hard to explain out of the context of growing up with it.”
“Perhaps,” Cait said. “And perhaps I do not want to know the answer. I preferred my world when it was a little safer, I suppose.” She turned back to the controls.
“We’re not all bad people,” Jace said.
“I never said-”
“It didn’t need to be said, sir.”
Cait turned back to Jace. “I apologize again.”
“No need.” Jace paused. “You do remind me of my mother, of Sally Norton. And that’s not at all a bad thing.”
Cait sighed. “Thank you, then.” She was aware of a tenuous, awkward smile on her muzzle, and she turned back to the controls. When she turned back to check on Jace, she found the pirate stepping out of the way of Billy.
“Jace,” he said.
“Doctor,” Jace replied, and stepped off the bridge.
“That was an interesting exchange,” Cait said after she was sure Jace was out of earshot.
“Just a greeting between colleagues.”
Cait made an interested sound in her throat. “Do I detect interest?”
“Do I detect cram it?”
Cait said nothing, but allowed a small, victorious smile.
“Hey, are we leaving?” Billy asked.
“Yes.”
“Weren’t we waiting for someone?” Billy sat down in the navigator’s seat and made himself comfortable, crossing one leg over the other.
“It appears Burian was wrong-”
Billy snorted.
“-about his lead,” Cait continued slowly. “We have another issue to tackle.”
“Galle.” Billy’s voice lost its playful edge.
“He has not checked in in several days. I cannot locate him on any Relay maps, and coast guards have a triangulated last known position, but nothing else.”
“Do you think-?”
“There are a lot of things I am thinking,” Cait said. “I intend to at least see what we can find in the area.” She fell silent, hands on the controls, and she let her head drop a little.
“I’m sure it’s nothing,” Billy said. “A simple radio malfunction-”
“I am not worried about Galle.”
Billy sat back, his arms folded over his chest. “Cait…”
“Fine, I am incredibly worried about Galle.” She tensed, kept focused, not turning back to Billy.
“I’m sure he’s fine. He and his plucky band of terrifying warrior clowns are out there. May the gods be favorable on anyone who runs across that circus.”
Tre strode on to the bridge. Cait gave him a quick pat on the arm as he slid past her into the helm’s chair.
“That reminds me,” she said. “Forgive me if you have told me this, as the last time I asked was two years ago, but how are you at the helm?”
Tre looked back at Cait, his ears alert.
“You are fine, dear. Do not worry.”
“Is it true, then?” Billy asked. “Have we lost Xiphos?”
“It does seem that way. I have not been able to get ahold of her yet. I would like to be prepared for that eventuality.”
Billy nodded, casting his eyes to a corner of the bridge. “That’s a shame.”
“Indeed,” Cait said. “I felt, however, that this day was to be expected.”
Billy didn’t answer. Tre gave a short sigh through his nose. Cait waited a moment, and then started towards the crew quarters. “Let me know when everyone has checked in,” she said without expecting much of a reply.
On her way to the crew quarters, she found Manni waiting in the reception gallery, her hands held behind her back as she looked over a few paintings that had been hung on the walls. It was hard to imagine from her poise that Manni was only twenty-three, that at twenty she was the ambassador for her newly formed nation. Cait remember Kelly being impressed when he had met Manni years ago. Here Cait got a first-hand look.
Manni turned to Cait when the captain entered.
“Captain,” she said, a hint of a smile allowed from behind her stoic facade. “I heard you were leaving, and I wanted to stop by before you did. I escorted Frankie back. You’ll find her in her cabin, I guess.”
“Thank you. I appreciate it. And thank you for your and your friends’ hospitality,” Cait said. She stuck out her hand and Manni shook it with careful precision, learned, Cait was sure, from her diplomacy circuit.
“It was our pleasure. We missed Xiphos very much. Crash was thrilled to see Xiphos still wore Crash’s old coat.”
“Do you know, Manni, what Xiphos’s intentions are?”
“As in staying?” Manni shrugged. “She and Crash have been keeping to themselves, mostly. They never discussed it with us.”
Cait put her hands on her hips. “We will be here for a bell or two more. If you see her, could you send her our way for an answer?”
“Absolutely.”
Cait bowed a thank you, and then started back to the crew quarters.
“Captain,” Manni called after her.
“Yes?”
Manni stood in the portal, backlit by the morning sun. “If you ever do come back, please find me?”
“Of course. Thank you.”
With that, Manni went on her way.
And so did the answers to her questions about Frankie, Cait realized. She considered chasing after Manni, but her mental checklist shouted at her in her head, and perhaps she could ask Frankie herself, and she thought about Galle, and the course that would have lead him not just to Logan, but into pirate territory and she wondered about Jace, and if Jace could be indicative of all pirates, and that maybe she’s had it wrong.
When she came out of her head she found herself standing above the cargo bay, looking down. She could hear the whispering, as if it had always been there. It waited, watching, she could swear it was watching, and expecting, but what?
“I don’t have time for this now,” she said, and the whispers stopped. She started back to the crew quarters to account for Auburn and Toby.
Xiphos came down the steps from the bridge. Cait stopped and Xiphos, seeing her hesitation, stopped.
“Xiphos,” Cait said, not quite believing it.
“Sir?” Xiphos set a bag down she had been carrying. She watched Cait, who stood still on the other side of the crew quarters.
“I had not expected to see you…”
Xiphos tilted her head. “The departure bell went off, so I came.” Her ears dropped a little. “Were you going to leave without me?”
“Not at all,” Cait said. “There were, however, rumours-”
“Rumors!” Xiphos laughed. “What’ve you told me about rumors?”
Cait smiled. “Hush. So that is it, then? Back to work?”
“Sir,” Xiphos said. “Ready to go. Auburn is in her quarters. Toby, too. In his, I mean. I checked for Tre. Captain Lake has accounted for Jace and Frankie. I don’t know about Billy.”
“He is accounted for. Well,” Cait said, hands on her hips. “Let’s get to it, then.”
“Yes, sir.” Xiphos set her bag inside her quarters and started towards the bridge.
“Helmsman,” Cait said after her.
“Sir?” She stopped and turned around.
“I am glad you have chosen to stay, Xiphos.”
Xiphos’s face flushed, slowly growing a gentle shade of pink. “Thank you, sir.” And she continued up to the bridge.
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Boat Story 054 Notes
Aug 31st, 2010 by grantcravens
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I think the biggest I should tackle right away is my clumsy handling of Cait and Manni, and what Manni’s intentions really were. Though I’ve stated a while ago that Xiphos, Crash, and Fink all had/have crushes on Manni, I did not state whether she reciprocated or not. She didn’t/doesn’t. I don’t give the impression here because we don’t spend a lot of time with Manni, but she’s a solitary person, even if she has friends she loves dearly. And she’s not one to hit on people.
That being said, what Manni was asking Cait was to be a resource to her. Manni wants to be Cait’s go-to person on the Prime Meridian, and if Cait does come back, Manni wants to be the first person Cait sees. I don’t think this is a weird request. Manni can see the value in the relationship, between someone with Cait’s clout (whether Cait has clout is a different thing all together), and also because she’s made Xiphos so, so happy, and that’s important, too.
The other thing I wanted to do in this section was bring out Jace a little more. She’s always been straight-faced in my mind, openly critical of Burian’s sillier ideas. She and Cait are formidable allies, though they don’t know it yet, or at least Cait doesn’t.
Erin pointed out to me last time the idea of a Billy/Jace pairing, and I don’t see it, frankly. Billy is quite the likable guy, but he and Jace have a relationship of two people who had fought on opposite sides of a war, and are finding out they were one or two trenches over from one another, and now they see the other is no longer a threat to them. They’re comparing notes. They’re reminiscing, or at least Billy is. They understand each other and they don’t at the same time.
And, yes Xiphos came back. This was her idea. In fact, she never intended to stay on the Prime Meridian. But while they were docked, she went to spend as much time as she could with Crash. She’d never leave Cait, not by choice.
So there it is. Thanks for reading. And, as always, I welcome any questions or comments you have.
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